Sunday, November 12, 2006

Sunday Night Poetry

I wrote the following poem in response to having my grammar corrected.

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I agree that my verbs did not agree.
But did you have to go ALL-CAPS on me?
Was that really the way to be?
You've made me shed an apostrophe :'(
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I don't think that you can comprehend the pain that I'm right now.

2 comments:

Jono said...

Nice poem. Profound. But who would be rude enough to correct your grammar?

daniel said...

Old honest comma,
Its overuse a trauma,
A bald man pauses.