Sunday, November 12, 2006

Sunday Night Poetry

I wrote the following poem in response to having my grammar corrected.

I agree that my verbs did not agree.
But did you have to go ALL-CAPS on me?
Was that really the way to be?
You've made me shed an apostrophe :'(

I don't think that you can comprehend the pain that I'm right now.


Jono said...

Nice poem. Profound. But who would be rude enough to correct your grammar?

daniel said...

Old honest comma,
Its overuse a trauma,
A bald man pauses.